Sound of love

New love was tentative and sweet,
hushed voices in the cinema,
holding hands, gentle and nervous,
love proclaimed in hesitant voices,

day to day love was more vibrant,
u knew me and i knew u,
months to become comfortable.
laughter, tears, shouting, singing,

the end of love was louder,
weeping, shouting,
screaming wanting 2 know y u wanted her and not me,

now u have gone and its silent here.

please comment this is one of my first poems on here and i'd love 2 kno wot u think thanks