Hm beautiful. the word choice was intersting. but that cat part; i didnt get it.

I got the cat part...cuz the wings of butterflies or whatever r really delicate and even when it gets touched the powder on the wings disables them from flying...but its the 1st stanza i didnt understand...

but the rest of it made up for it so i gave u 5/5 =)

This poem kind of reminds me of my style of writing. I also like it because it tells a story, and blends together.