Comments : The End (Part 2 of "The Run")

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    GOOD POEM

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Wow... Great poem... great the way you set the pace for the reader... Nice peace! Kind regards from Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I gave it a 5 you kept the images going one after another it was very well done, the subject was bold and your telling of it was right on great job you did well little one...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    i gave it a 5 if i could give it a 10 i woulda... keep up all the good work... remember you decide your future....
    ~*~Ashley~*~