Time

by Bre   Jul 24, 2005


One with love is lucky
as one with wealth is
But one with no time
No time for love
It becomes a burden to both
One with no time to
Appreciate the little things
With every action
Insults the other
Is love meant to be painful?
Is love suppose to hurt?
Pain is caused by ignorance
Which is caused by impairment
Your heart bases on emotion
As your brain bases on logic
So the question is
EMOTION or LOGIC
To become committed shows character
But a relationship takes two
Not character
Him and her
One with love is lucky but one with time is luckier

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  • 18 years ago

    by Travis Kjemperud

    You have to understand the bases of the poem Azreal. The poem has good logic used through out it. You obviously knew what you were talking about. The poem wasnt fluent and sometimes didnt make all the sense in the way of flowing. But not all poems need to rhyme. So i believe you did exceptionaly well for a poem that doesnt rhyme.

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