wow this is a great poem, it really relates to me, great job!~whittney

short but sweet. lovely work. :)

xxx

another sweet poem but in the third paragraph there are two ours you may want to edit it out just a thought...

Very good poem, not your best, but again the rhyming was perfect and it flowed very nicely.

"I can picture the,
rest our our life."

The only thing you should fix is the 2 ours in that second line, it should be

"I can picture,
The rest of our life"

Or something like that. Another great poem though. Keep it up ღ

"I can picture

Hey SiS wasup? this is a cute poem.is it 4 Adam?Well i Gess so.lol luv u hun keep up the good work.bye.o and E-mail me grl tell me wasup.

Liked it alot, and thanks for your comments:) "My pure" is dedicated to a girl I can't get more or less.

Best wishes,
Patrik

You didn't need to make this one long. Your heart is telling you the right words, it just means that you know what you want to say! Great job! I loved it! Another 5!

good...the last two stanzas are a bit off but other then that i liked it good job....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

i like this one, its very sweet.