"threw" should be through

I love this part...
"You know that we've shared many a kiss,
But you always go for another, just can't resist."

And this ending is wonderful...
You know that we've said so many, "I love yous,"
But the feeling you get when you know its true.

It’s valuable and heart melting you cherish it with everything you do.
Then you say, "I love you too."

Lovely poem.

xxx

I know your young and you may not want to hear this. I think to be a good writer you must learn to be able to write about everything and anything in life. Your a girl and your in love I know this from what you wrote but, If you look deeper at what lives around you and learn to open your eyes to everything not just your world you will come to learn that being a writer is so much more about what you and portray to others then what you want you wish to dwell on. Don't take this the wrong way look beyond your world and show us what you see in the world around you...

I loved this poem, the flow was off alittle bit because 1 or 2 of the lines were longer than the rest, but I do that sometimes too. The rhyming was perfect though, and I loved this whole poem because I can relate. 5.5 ღ

This is so gorgeous. Even though it's short, it's takes nothing away from the meaning you're trying to convey! Great job...

AWWWWWWWW that poem is sooooo sweet and o so true! i wish i could write like you can! That poem sounds like it waqs written about me and my boyfriend!

good but the flow is a bit rough...nice job though...4/5 keep it up....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

very cute