Yah...another nightmare of mine... I think I'm failing on you guys... not making any dark poems...I'm failing myself and you...I'm sorry...

your not failing!!! i like this poem its great!! hugs courtie

That's right, you are not failing. If you're failing yourself...well I'm sorry; I can't really help you there...but you're not failing your readers...besides, don't worry about them. Just write - no worries, no failures...write as you've done, and you'll grow to be an even better poet.

Take care.

xxx

That was a great poem good job keep it up
5-5
-Sarah-

omigosh[:)] this poem is sick(in a good way)

... that was weird... deep, scary, n' weird.

BUT... I liked it. Different. Ur different! Ima have to check out your poems more often :)

((thanks for reading one of mine))

Good one, as usual!

Wonderful just like your other poems.
keep it up and you'll be a famous poet
someday.
take care,
marjan

You are a great poet, that's all i can say.

Great poem 5/5

All i can say... i just love reading and no matter what other say. your good and one of the best... for me the important of kbeing poetry is not how many words can combine to produce a perfect one... but to touch the heart even the emotion of every readers... i love it... can you make a poem for friends?!!!