I'm At a Lost For Words...That Was Very Very Beautiful D And The Whole Time I Read It I Was Smiling Cuz' I kNo Yo Azz Waz gOn Brang iT *Huggerz* Awwerz iM So Muhfuccn PrOuda u babii FaCe.....wOw...Dat Waz Da Shii *Tiyad Of Tawlkan Propa* iM Happii Ta c Dyss Syda u...iM Speechlezz 5.0! xoxo-Mizz Nikki-xoxo

awesome ideas in this poem too and you expressed them really well, i like the emotion in this poem. good job hun i look forward to reading more!!

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Sara

this was really good...i like the ending...great job! 5/5

jaz.....lol....i mean darin..my bad i 4got bout that..ya poem is hott....it is very different but sooo true bout life....im gon make some poems 2...not as good as jenae...tho..lol

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Amazing topic and meaning. The world is such a cold place but by the time many people are old enough to help make a big difference they give up and are turning cold themselves.

~~Retniapdoolb

Wow i really like this poem you have a lot a talent...hopefully i can write liek that 1 day..