nice creativity, maybe try and make it longer and add more gruesome stuff lol
very well done, i've give you a 5

very difffrent witch makes me like it keep up the ggod work! 5/5!

hi ezy, I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!

Haha i know when you wrote that :) it was AGES AGO now i really have to be on poems and quotes more lol noticed you havent had anyhate mail yet i have YAY im hated!you must have more talent than me (dont rub it in)

Ok esther im comment again. THER YA GO! hoped ya liked it

Its cute. i like the first couplet and the head of pupil etc. that line was esp creative. the last couplet was a little cliche-ish.

do you have any advice for the poem that you commented on. i would really appriciate it.

Experience and imagination are two completely different things, you might want to take a look at what you were trying to say in teh first place because i think you are confused

Nice way of writting! it was a little bit funny :)

keep it up!

Another great poem that i really enjoyed reading.

Aww now this is something. You have the talent keep writing. 5/5.

I liked that one, it was creative. keep writing, you do have some talent there. just let it shine through
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