Cool poem. Love your style.
"What once entered this world crying
Shall now leave this world dying."
I also love those two lines. Very cool poem.
~Faith of the Fallen

love the metaphorical use...really effective.
take care x x x

This poem is my favorite. I totally agree with this. But your standards are what you need and desire:) Dont ever lower them, because you will find perfection in your eyes, the one who you will see, as... perfect!:)

Love ya,
Ana*