Beautiful...I agree with B.R.F. Angel ^ ...written gracefully (YES)...and emotional...and real...I love the ending especially...

"Tears made a colorless mist for me that night.
The closest person can always hurt you the worse...
My life should be secluded, with only the shadows.
Too bad she was beautiful..."

I relate to the last part...the last two lines...just great final words there....

xxx
 

Everything became shattered, broken and decayed.
Left me, for someone you already had at the start.

thats a beautiful line...it described my old love so truely...when u are left alone, betrayed by somone you gave you heart to, and then they went back to somone who had left them. Love is cruel. Living is crueler.

weeping wolf