Hey mates,
Its just how I think about Troubles, they are just like Bubbles. wishing my idea would be catchable.

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

The troubles in live pop away as
the bubbles do in a soda’s life.
Turn the bubbles into the pleasure of
life so your life may never be flat,
but one good adventure after another.

An excellent write indeed, Write On.

Thank you Boqie for your nice comment and support.

Very good! 5/5

Great job and very uniquely writen with a great meaning! keep it up!
Godbless,
erica*

Oh Thank you Erica, I was just about to comment on one of your poems. am gonna keep it up, I promiss.

Bless you too
Rua Francis.

nice metaphor

lol v amusing
peace courtie

Lol...thats is a very cute way to look at your problems and troubles! I loved how this was written...so different, so unique, and so GREAT!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Oh thank you Chelsey, your sweet

Best Wishes
Rua

hehe thats nice.
emmy

Cute poem. I loved the perspective:) Very creative. I never would've thought to equate soda to life. Nice metaphor:) Great job. Oh, and by the way. Thanks for the comments on my poems. I really appreciated it:)