Beautiful, and very touching, it's so nice to read about friendships like yours. One thing though...
"and maybe the sun light up another day.
honey, i know you're hurting, but i'll always be here,
i'll always be your friend and i'll always be here."
I believe you meant to say "the sun will light up another day"
And for that last rhyme instead of using the same word you could you "near"

Nice job still. Keep up the good work
~*Freak*~

I'd say take Freak's suggestions... it's great...I love this one.

xxx