Fly Away to Paradise - V.2

I rewrote some of this to -try- and make it better. So.. voila.
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When I say I love you
I mean it through and through
I swear with you by my side
I have never lied

My heart beats with emotion
There's no way I can prove such devotion
Love has such power
With love, nothing tastes sour

Words and sweet gestures are nice
It can turn hearts into gold, when they were once ice
Never will I leave you once I've found you
To your heart, please hold that true
[NOTE: I've used that line before. In 'M.D.R.E - I love you'.]

Red may mean passion
But is that really the fashion?
Red must mean love
That's something you can't find enough of

It makes us blossom into something great
Have I said I love you, as of late?
I want to love you forever and more
I'll always be with you, that's for sure

When I see you, my fears go away
I can trust that you'll never lead me a stray
And if you'd stay with me, that'd be nice
Cause someday, we'll fly away to paradise

When I look at you
I fall into a trance
Will I ever leave you?
Not a chance.
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Eh, so it's not that great. But oh well. I meant every word of it, and that's what counts.