Is this any good? I dunno... I have very low self essteem, but will not express myself now...

Refusal is the key...it is good....and you're learning!

"I couldn’t stop themcouldn'tcoming,
there message was clear,
so I did what I did..."

^ That first line needs to be fixed...

Definitely good work, Michael. Keep on writing ;)

xxx

That's a very very sad poem but I thought it was good
GOOD JOB Keep it up
*Sarah*