I don't know why its got such a low rating cuz its really good. It's short and I would lvoe to read it if it was longer but o well good idea too.:)

short but powerful words...I think it's really good.

thanks for the comment :)

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5/5 i think your good at writing. I think you should take the time to right a long poem. Please check out my poems.
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