I like it alot, well written, keep it up.

This was a really good poem as well! I prefere love poems to sad poems (even if it is sad love poems). One little peice of advice, don't try to run away from problems...it never works. but one day, things will become clear, as the clouds in the sky dissapear. (sorry, poetic mood).
Anyway, great poem, i loved it.
Bye Bye
Ben

wow. you have left me in awe. keep up the good work.

Hey i think your poem is really nice..It flows together really well and i can see you have put every single bit of emotion in to that poem, spot on, really good stuff. Hope theres more comming, loved it!!

Jade...:)

that was a fantastic poem.. ending was great. keep it up. well done

thats a really good poem!! i can relate to it heaps!! welldone *5/5*
xx

That's a really good poem... i liked it alot. Good job. 5/5. Check mine out if you want. -Kassie

oo i loved it!!!! written really good!!! great job keep writting!!
~britty

wow...... its awesome 5/5 xox