I thghout that was really deep and well written. keep it up i enjoyed it:)lol i have no idea what you meant when you said this:
A quixotic hullabaloo
Or a roué
but still good lol. (I'm not the brightest)

Ok to be honist I could not read all the way through it. I tryed reading it 6 times and it made no scence to me. Sorry.

A little bit long! Your choice of words were well chosen. Another great poem! ~Brooke~

Wow, quite long, but extremely good. Amazing how you pulled all of it together in the last few lines, great job- 5/5

Very interesting idea. You definitely wrote this poem in a refreshing and unique way, and I have to say it made me think. I like it a lot.

that was reli deep.. i loved the way u conveyed ur message out on paper.. and even tho ther was no rhyme, ur piece had a music of its own.. i lyk the way it sounded as if it's thoughts out loud..
never stop.. keep goin.. ur doin gr8
wonderfully written
nouna

I think it was a little long and i suggest to make it cleaner that you spearate your stanzas instead of having a big clump but besides that nice job..i had trouble following but overall nice work...:) luv yas mwah

-kayla-

wow, I love the wording, the emotion, the thought that you put into this poem.. It's so different and yet so wonderful, I read it twice, and each time I enjoyed it more.. good job.

wow this poem is amazing ... some word i didn't understand but i got the just of things ... how u thought to come up with this amazes me ... well done 10/5 if possible