This poem is awesome. It not only expresses your feelings, but it is also a beautiful poem.

Wow. That was really good.
You were creative and I loved the flow in it.
Work on how long you make the linI’ll follow it with yellow,
To show how happy you made me,
And then green,
To show we were naturally meant to be,
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That was an example ^^^^

wow u have a creative spark and i like that... at first i didnt understand the reason y it was sad because when we think of beauty we dont c sad... but this peice it was beautiful and sad i really liked it keep up the good work.... read some of mine when u get the chance!
love always
Katie

WOW, I'm speechless, that was so beautifully written, I love it!!!! What a great idea with the whole rainbow thing....If I could I would give you so much more than 5, but sorry I can't =0)

*Hugs Sabrina*

OMG that was just EXCELLENT I truly LOVE your poems!! they are all really really good!!

oh wow !! i really like this, it's so different to my poem 'rainbow' it's got a completely different message and is written so differently....... i love it !!!!!!
charli xxxxx

That poem was very very good keep it up!!!
-Chase Witt

your poem is a good one, thought what I have lost and gain....thanx

Wow that was really pretty. It kinda started out happy then ended sad. What's your favorite color?...

thats a good poem, i like what you did with the ending, *5/5* keep up the good work

thats a good poem, i like what you did with the ending, *5/5* keep up the good work

i luved that poem cuz u expressed all ur emotions it was really creative its kool to read a nother young persons poems cause i'm 13 too

keep writing and always write from ur soul,
She//-y

wow wow wow..that is legendary makes me think

thnx
yours in christ

angel

Beautiful. I really loved that. It's a good idea for a poem too! :) 5/5

... Make sure you check out mine! :)

Omg i love it....its is great...i think ull be added to my fav list

Omg.. you are certainly one talented writer! this is a BRILLIANT poem. 5/5 well done. keep up the excellent work! bec x x

Lovely poem, wonderfully written! Nice flow and good theme! Well done!