Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's sooo beautifully sad!!!! Awwwwww!!!!!!!!! Bravo, my dear!! Yay, Georgi, I loved it!!! great one! I'm sure she'd appreciate it.

WOW!WOW!WOW! These girls sound like three beautiful angels! They sound so amazing.

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

I am amazed by your understanding of life and pain.

do you work with childern? great job 5/5

U write what u see, that's good, mre detail though

A child with an illness like that just breaks my heart...It's so sad to know that a defenseless child suffers from such things...

this is a good poem and u obviously have empathy for these girls, very good, well written

well done
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oh huni thats beautiful! u really have a way with words and its beautiful how these girls really touched your heart! love u always xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Very buetiful