AWWWWWW!! ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM!!! WHERE DID YOU MEET ALL THESE GIRLS????? That's sooooo sweeeeeeet!!! I can almost see her nowwww and her little toesies and fingers, hehe...but poor thing...

blaaaaq I hate social services sometimes, lol, they're too nosy.

SIERRA

OOOO sweetie this is great! This girls sound like amazing people and give them all my love!

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

I think it's interesting how you choose to write about these girls. Another good poem.

aww thats really sad... she might have to be tube fed.. sounds like she has anorexia.. you know that childern really young can have that right?
i did at 6

You got me all curious now...how do you know these girls and what's wrong with them?

This one is great Georgi...I don't think it needs to be changed. This is my favorite line- 'Even when life wilts like a rose' ......creative.....and itt flowed very well...Nicely done!

I like the picture painted, again more detail,
it was good

This is a great poem...how do you know so many unfortunate children?

really good, nice flow, deep meaning, i liked it, could u comment on mine? thanks 5/5

well done
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I'm in tears....that was gorgeous! xxxxxx

Ok now im very gelous your poems are REALLY good