Heyy, no-one commented so I thought I would :) hehe. Well, i liked your poem, wasn't too bad at all. I think that the one thing that could have made it better for me as a reader, was if the last line had a more dramatic effect if you get what i mean. Just something to make your spine shiver. But yeah, I liked it :). Peace

heyhey i like your poem, it was very good, keep up the good work.

that was really good keep it up :P

thx energised bunny, that was a cool idea n i av used it
*Michelle*

hey that was great i liked how it rymes and I can relate to that,, nice job
Rach

Nice poem. i liked it. i can kinda relate. By the way, thanks for commenting on my poem. i really appreciate it. Keep writing.

wow this poem is amazing i know how it is i hvae written simislar poems you never meant to hurt anyone else you were just trying to help yourself
lots of love
☼Becky☼

Hey
well done grate work
keep it up
l0ve s0ph
p.s. take a look at some of my work

Wow. brilliant poem 5/5 for sure... thanks heaps for the comment on my poem its very much appreciated. i now have you on my favourites so ill be able to check out more of your poems ('',) take care...hope your ok xx

I like it. You did a nice job with alternating rhyme scemes (ABAB). Keep up the good work 5/5.

Wow, I really really like this poem. It's so good. I know how you feel, I can relate to it soo well. Everytime I read something like this it brings chills to my spine, because it's a part of my past I'm trying to forget. And since that isn't exactly happening, I just face that type of thing head on! Great Job. =)

x.xBrokenx.x