That Was Powerful...I Like All Your Endings 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

very good ideas in this poem and it's very well written, i enjoyed reading it...good job and keep it up :)

xoxo
Sara

i love the ending...this has a powerful message, so good job! 5/5

Boring..lol..lol...Darin...lmao....gotta gey used 2 this..lol...lol..that poem was HOTT...u go girl...i mean boy!!!!!:D :P

lmao.. mayne.. you sucha ass hole

Yo Yo D na u knw ya poem is Hottt!!!!!! with 3 t's .lol....ya got it goin on ..n ya lyrics Tight!!

Definitly my favorite of all of yours it seemed to end quickly though like there is more to be said but still great write.

I really liked reading yours poems...let me know when you write some more and I'll check them out.

~~~Retniapdoolb