im sry i know how that feels i watch my sister go through it but i got to her in time before she could go any further.

this is really sad, it nearly made me cry. i used to be the same as your friend but i had help getting out of it before i got in too deep, im sorry your friend didnt. the poem is really good. lv em xxx

wow... amazing!!! im really sorry this happened, if it did. take care and stay strong!
-xXx-

good job!! ^_^ keep it up

good job!! ^_^ keep it up

:( very sad, but good write. keep it up.

that is extremely sad...tears in my eyes. so obviously got ur emotions across really well. the thing is i know exactly how u feel, and i'm not over it to this day. keep writing x x x
pm if u ever need...always here

Aw... that made me kinda cry...
;______;

But :applause: Very well written.

wow dude, that was really good

i love dis poem alot i read it and it made me cry!!!!

that's good for a boy

awsome poem!! welldone!!
sorry to hear bout ur friend
xx

wow. this is sad.... nicely welldone

Keep your head up!

sorry i have to comment again.. i just re-read it and still has same effect... really really done *hat off to you*
lol...keep writin!!!
take care x x x

omg im so sorry about yuor friend but that was an amazing poem really got the emotions through in it. congrats n keep it up xxx

Great job!! Very touching!! You have talent!! Keep writing!! 5/5

thats really well written, keep it up