again..love the style..not so blunt...really intriguing..keep writing anna x x x

Tres Brilliant! I love the medaphor you used! You know how much i love those ;) Whatever happens, keep writing, your so great at it!

Luv ya,
Ana*

love it

AWW! I don't think your curly hair is "nerdy" I think it's cute! Hehe, great poem! Kind regards from Amanda!

You're the one shrimp that sticks out to me!! You're an awesome person!! And a great poet! I don't see how anyone would think you're "Nerdy!" But, then again, it does not matter what they would think!! You're a really sweet person! I loved your poem!

Love, MANA!!!

Unique write with lots of insights ;-)
Primely written, the last stanza is my fave.
Thanks for your comments, but you know constructive critism is always helpfull, isn't it. S

Thanks for your comments, but you know constructive critism is always helpfull, isn't it ?!?! So I also have to defend my poem, it's a Rondeau, yes it is *lol*, but it's a standard literary Rondeau like John McCrae used to write it, with 15 lines. And the refrain consists of the first few words of the first line of the first stanza, in such a way only two rhymes are used. The rhyme scheme is like that then : aabba aabR aabbaR. R=refrain

Thanks for your comments again, I hope to read more great work like that.

See you :-)
Sabine