this is a good poem, but i think there are a couple of mistakes such as i think you ment Fire, not fie, and your instead of you. if not please forgive me. otherwise it was very good, i would just advise proof reading it first, but we all make those silly mistakes. :D

keep it up ^_^

wonderful poem.... keep up the great work..

Best one of urs so far! i luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it!