really good poem!! very well writen!! wat u say is ever so true!! *5/5*
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i lyk the line "Ill always be there for u".. it mademe smile.. i think u shud add a c to distration in the beginning.. i get wat u wanna say, but i dun think u carried it out the best way.. ur flow was off, but ur rhythm was OK..
keep goin

I like it alot, good job.

awww.. thats really sweet!!!! u seem like a great friend.. it was a nice poem!! i like it!!! keep up the good work! :) take care!

*~peace and love~*

It's great that you're there for your friend. I hope everything will be okay! Well expressed feelings! Take Care! Brooke~

How lovely! Sounds like you were there when she most needed someone...your rhyming is great and the heart is definitely in there.... you can really help someone by simply talking/listening and letting her know there's always someone there.... :)

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hey allen, you did a great job on this one.
take care,
marjan

nice poem...i loved it, thanks 4 the commnet

very good poem, 5/5

That is so cute and really good...

Very nice poem. If it's true, your friends really lucky to have you. It kinda reminded me of my x-best friend, Which is a bad thing. But I still liked the poem heaps. The flow and rhyming were great in this one aswell. Awesome write! 5/5

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