ew.. dont tell me what to do .. lol.. i love it.. ok.. well bye

^ I don't get what she was saying..anyways...I loved this peice..as well as I do your brother..anyone who fights for our country has my love and I thank him for it! THis was a beautiful dedication and more then anything he should be proud of you for having the talent you do! Keep it up!
~Chelsey~

great sentiment and a good read

damn, girl, your poem made me cry. my boyfriend's brother is in the National Guard, and i am really worried about him. kudos to your brother for protecting out country. if you write to him, tell him he is in the prayers of many who don't know him. much love to you + your brother, Haley

Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job