Dust

by crystal   Jul 30, 2005


There are somethings you can count on
somethings you can trust
somethings stay forever
but somethings fade to dust

you know the sun will always shine
and the seasons will come and go
the clouds will clear
and the falling leaves turn to snow

i thought that this was like that
that it was something i could count on
but today i came to find
that everything we had, is gone

you turned your back on me
said "i'm sorry" and walked away
you turned my world to dust
and that was all that you could say?

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  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I like your poems alot there very good keep it up 5/5 and thanks for your comments

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    great write hun I liked your choice of words

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    The first stanza flows very well, it's alittle off in the other stanza's but still a well written poem. I like the way you compare the relationship to nature.. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    true true...5/5
    much love

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    I liked it alot, not much more I can say really:p

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

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