I Promise Forever

by ~DyingBlackRose~   Jul 31, 2005


From the first moment I seen you walk by me.
I knew instantly that I would love you.
And that I would need you in my life to survive.
You're all I ever thought about.

A month later you started talking to me.
But then you got a girlfriend and everything fell apart.
I let go and turned to someone else.
Then they gave up on me.

He let me go and held on for 2 weeks.
Then he never came back even though he promised he would.
It broke my heart in two and my heart was never put back together.
Until you started talking to me again.

You started flirting with me and brought back all the feelings again.
I flirted back, and fell in love with you.
I looked into your eyes and instantly seen my future.
And you said that you needed me to live and survive.
I promise you forever.
And I never break my promises.
That's just the way I am.
And the way I'll always be.

I Promise Forever!

*please vote or comment and I'll do the same.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a nice one! Yes, feelings are very true. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is a REALLY great poem I've felt this exact same way before. Keep it up!!! :-)
    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristi Hurt

    This is a really good poem. it reminds me of how i feel about my boyfriend justin wilson. he is really great. The feelings you put into this poem are sooo true!!!!!!!i wish i could write like you and express myself like that!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    nice job keep it up 5/5