This poem is true. My ex-husband decided to beat up my 14 year old son the night of July 28th.

My son is fine physically, but emotionally te poor boy is breaking insde.

godness, sher i'm sorry that happened to your son....how cruel this man who beat up his son, i'll pray the god so that it will never hapened again to your son, may a god bring happiness.

absolutely beautiful sad written, you'll will be in myprayer. bless you.

bert.~

What a sad poem! you really have it fulled with emotion and it just grabbed me into it with your words! great job! I can't stand mothers that keep thier children in these experiances too, to cause a child so much pain, it's terribly sad. if you relate to it i'm deeply sorry

~Jacklyn

I loved your poem.
and thank you for the advice... about the last stanza... Then ending for it came this morning. and i thank you ... and God.. for it.

Aw, how touching. i'm sorry if this happened. if it didn't, you still did an amazing job potraying this.

Flawless flow

Wow. that was so sad. im so sorry that this happened to your son..i used to get beat when i was younger..i healed on the outside, but I never will heal on the inside.

I am totally speechless... Your talent will inspire a lot of people out there... Keep wiriting... I'm truly sorry.

...Whoa!!! that was deep and emotionally charged...how sad that it is a true story...I hope everything has changed for the better! God Bless You & Your Family!!

*Ciao*

I am deeply saddened that this is inspired by true events. You should be proud of yourself for having the strength to get your family out of this type of environment. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your children. Best of luck to you. Thank you for sharing your poems.

Well written. It's horrible that some men seem to need violence to feel powerfull.

I love the way you wrote how you showed that the beaten teen needs someone to hold on to diring this hard time-in this casse momma.

Wonderfull

God,this i can realte 2,so much emotion in this,its really good

Oh,again i can relate to this poem, i have writen some like it,but i think this is amazing!!

This was so heartbreaking. I could feel the pain in the poem. Very well. 5/5

I'm fourteen.
This is my dad.
And my mum.
I can't tell.

5/5 emotional