This is really cute. luvya hunxxxxxxxxx

wow that was a very good poem very sweet, i really liked

Anthony

my friend showed me this poem. i found it really great. keep up the great work and if you can please comment me back.

Very sweet and full of true feelings! I would give it to him why not you have nothing to lose! Good luck and take care~ Brooke =)

That is original!? i love it?!

the flow was well, and the idea was great!?

Like brooke said its sweet and full of true feelings!?

Yeah you should give it to him cause its great!?

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yup, its a tear-jerker, keep writing. You're very good.

awwl.. very sweet i absolutely loved it. great job!

Great job!! my only suggestion is stanzas and that would make it easier to read! 5/5

That was beautiful hun! very creative and i enjoyed reading it..n i love the ending:) well done;) :>