5/5! great job...i don't have anything to say about it! keep it up!

short, but deep. well written n i enjoyed reading it, good job and keep it up!!!

i'll read some others too probably...

Sara

it was a lil short but i really liked it.. sometimes it only takes a few lines to get your point across and that was the all it took in this poem but great job i absolutely loved it. i gave it a 5

A little short, but well written with a great flow in the words:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

hmm..could use a little work but i like it...it seems to get cut..but..the rest seems fine:D

Wow you really made an impression without beating around the bush (i hate that expression but it fits here) i really like it- 5/5