Comments : Step Mom!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I think that this is good and that you have a lot of emotion here...I also think that you're talented and that you could make this better...I'm not being mean, I think this is great! If you like it the way it is, leave it, but, I'm pretty sure that you could enrich the text a little bit...5/5 though! Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    wow... nicely written. i get the vibe you dislike her, but dont hate her. good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Well written...you expressed your feelings well...nice rhyming...and I'm sorry you have to deal with the woman your dad married.... Take care.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    It’s good to release those feelings. This was a very sad poem, but full of true emotions, I am sorry you have to go through this. Take Care of yourself! Brooke~