Unspoken words left me.....

by lilgurley4u   Aug 2, 2005


Well not sure if this is the right title for the poem so be grateful for some suggestions..Ty

use to think our love was strong
Use to walk without a doubt,
I didn't have to doubt our feelings
because they just seemed secure;
We thought we were as whole as it can get,
but we were wrong.
We just assumed the feelings,
the emotions we shared
were enough to keep us alive;
but our unspoken words let us die alone
and broken hearted;
because we just thought no words
could ever express what we felt deep inside.
But if our words and expressions were revealed
then we still may be together.
So now I just wish we told the whole world
how much love we felt,
so I wouldn't be here dying,
and wishing I told you how much I love you!
Maybe one day I will get to tell you
I am sorry I took our love for granted
and wish I could give it back to you someday,
until then my unspoken words leave me here to die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Manda

    i think the title is fine. loved the poem. 5/5 it speaks the truth but then again you always do. i really enjoyed this poem. keep up the great work!

    ~Manda

  • 18 years ago

    by Ricardo

    Hi,

    I think that the title of your poem is fine. I felt identify with it. I really like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Assumed Feelings should be its title, I really like your work keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine