well done jos.. i love it!!! gonna miss you heaps and keep wiriting
take care x x x

Aw....this is so sad...5/5

So don't try to talk to me, after all you've done,
i know i may have lost you, but i'm trying to tell myself i have won

these lines were beautiful...
lovely read
maybe u could space them apart after every 2 lines to make it a easier read..
of course... all of us wonder why we still care..why we still love.. !!
its tough but hope you will get through it
love
amy

Omg i love this poem so much i know the feeling...with one of my ex's i told myself i was over him but the second i saw him with another girl omg i went insanely jealous and this poem is just awesome good going girly keep it up