Comments : The Days of a Child

  • 15 years ago

    by Christa

    I really liked this poem. You seem to be a deep thinker, and thats a great quality, especially in writing.

  • This Poem Is To Dam Good To Be a 4 Nigga! I Gave U a 5.0 :) Luv u BrOtha *smOoChez* -Nikk♥

  • 14 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    This one is very interesting. I wasn't sure what you meant with the last line "Are still knocking at my door" but maybe I should read it over again.

    Also I think in the second line it is supossed to be "Not" instead of "No" but yeah.

    And with my poem "Have a Little Fun" it is just basically saying have fun and don't be scared because the pain you feel then leads up to your strength as an adult....same with emotional pain...it will hurt but relax it makes you a stronger person.

  • 14 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Some flow problems but this had been quite well done. Some words were a little iffy but really enjoyed this. This was really...wow....Don't know how to describe it except that it was really something that I was really impressed by.
    ~Faith-less

  • 14 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem holds so much truth that many young people need to learn to see. You did a great job on this and I'm sure that many people can relate to it at least to some degree. I loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!