Comments : A Ray of Shining Hope

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    aww i gotcha..lol..troubles right...lol..im slow sometimes...anyway good job nice rhyming...lol...5/5 luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    ok so your like my favorite writer. im sure you've heard this alot but your great! your poems are so meaningful and your rhyming is just...awesome. it flows excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    that was a very good poem.... 5/5... if you can will u plz vote and comment on some of my stuff it is greatly appriciated.... thanks...xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. well i hope everything works out. As far as the poem excellent job. I really loved this one the best out of all. Maybe because i can relate to that feeling. Anyways your a great poet so keep writing and i plan to read more!

    xoxox Britney xoxox