wow! another amazing poem, all poems dont have to rhyme to be good.

Awwl.. yea well it doesnt rhyme but not all poems do! still a very excellent poem. Great way to express yourself! Loved it and enjoyed the read.

It's ok. Not all poems need to rhyme, and this one was good enough without it. I liked it a lot. Take care and God bless.

For a non rhyming poem, this was beautiful. I don't know why, but I pictured angels singing in my head while I was reading this. I loved this line: "That's one second Of your love to me Let me relive that Don't leave me here My life was too perfect" So sweet.