I really like this, I love reading different styles of poetry. For me after reading 90 million free-verse style of poetry it sticks out more to me and i'm able to grasp the meaning better.

This is beautiful, and you did a great job. :)

The poem was great, and the style was even exceptional...

I commend you for it.

I will try out the style...Lol..

Very nice. I'm not usually I big fan of nature poems, but this is an exception. I liked how despite needing to fit into a particular format, your words and your rhyming do not sound at all forced. Excellent piece here.