In this perfect world.

by Brandi   Aug 3, 2005


IN THIS PERFECT WORLD.
THE CHILDRENS DREAMS ARE SWEET
THE CARS DON’T GIVE OUT ANY SMOG
WE DO NOT KILL TO EAT.

NOTHING IS EVER DIRTY.
THE LANGUAGE IS ALWAYS CLEAN.
NOTHING IS EVER FOR MONEY.
AND NOTHING IS AS IT SEEMS.

PEOPLE SMILE AND WAVE OUT OF
PURE POLITNESS TO BE OBTAINED.
KIDS TREATED WITH THE UTMOST RESPECT
PARENTS TREATED LIKE PURE SAINTS.

THE GRASS WAS NEVER YELLOW.
THE WATER ALWAYS BLUE.
NO ONE SUFFERED FROM ANY LOSS.
BECAUSE THEY KNEW JUST WHAT TO DO

FAILURE WASN’T A PROBLEM
NOR THE THOUGHT OF PAIN.
AND IF THEY LOSTAN ACHIEVMENT OF SOME SORT
THE THOUGHT OF COFINDENCE WAS GAINED.

THEY SMILED AT THE LITTLEST THINGS.
GAVE EVERYONE THEY KNEW THEIR LOVE.
EVERYONE BELIEVED THAT LETTING SOMEONE GO
WAS SIMPLY GIVING THEM LIFE ABOVE.

NO ONE KNEW THE MEANING OF DEATH.
FOR IT HAPPENED AS LITTLE AS NEVER
THEY SHARED THE THOUGHTS OF THE ONES THEY LOVED.
AND HELD ON TO THEM FOREVER.

BEER WAS NEVER INVENTED.
FOR THEY DRANK COLD WINE AND MORE.
NO ONE SAT AWAY FROM THE TABLE
AND THERES FRESH FOOD IN EVERY STORE.

IN THIS PERFECT WORLD
THE ANIMALS HAD THEIR HOMES
NO HUNTING WAS ALLOWD
AND NO ANIMAL LEFT ALONE.

DON’T YOU WISH WE LIVED IN A PERFECT WORLD.
OH THE SIGHTS WE’D SEE
BUT WE WILL NEVER LIVE IN A PERFECT WORLD
FOR THIS WAS JUST A DREAM.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very creative. I loved the ending the most. But it's all an amazing write. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne