the overall poem is sad but the content could be a little bit better.

Poweful poem its sad when your family wont listen.

take care

wow! awesome poem. i liked it alot. great rhyming. its different

WOW THIS IS SOOOO GOOD. i feel like this sometimes...but plese don't give up i read your work in the past and i loved it...but now it just got better and better i am really proud of you...i gave you a 5/5

and o yeah u wrote this poem on my birthday thats wat makes it a lil bit more special

very good poem...although it seems to me as though there was trouble connecting the two ideas of being mad and then commiting suicide....just my opinion though...overall nice job...love yas mwah

-kayla-

Very good poem but i hope you dont really feel this way

I know how it feels, it was great and FULL of emotion! it deserves 5/5 stars all the way!

Wow, deep emotion, good ending, good overall

Some of your rhymes are such cliche's its not even funny....but mostly over all a great poem...4/5

Wow! this was a great poem!
i can' totaly relate to what ur saying in this poem! great write. 5/5

Nicely done..

Once again i am put back at how the words that you write are so true thank you

Amazing poem. such a sad situation. it's horriable to watch it happen to a friend. i can just imagine what it would be like to go through it. i'm sorry that you have to. but keep up the great writing!
crystal

I get that from my mom too. Ill just have to bmake sure that when I have kids I really listen to them.
great poem, by the way

I love this this is a wonderful idea to write about shut up are harsh words to hear from anybody ecsepcially your parents i loved the 5th stanza your really talented

I am going through a very simialar thing in my life right now. I wouldnt call it a phase because I dont know how long it will last, but anyways I asked my mom for help and she said she didnt want to pay the hospital BILLS! I cut my wrist in front of her and she took the knife and told me to go to my room and put a band aid on it......I feel the motherly love.

Nice job withthe poem iam sorry such a sad poem had to be made on mt birthday but it's kool lol.. i hope you ok nice poem 5.5

Great poem, nicely done. I can almost relate, though I'm not.. suicidal. I just feel like my parents don't care. 5/5, good job!

Ya, my mothers a bi%ch too. i think they enjoy hurting us, im right there with you though, sucks when they dont listen to us. loved the poem. 5/5 :)