Comments : Autumns Advice

  • 13 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Great work with so muich intesity. I love like your words flow and the meaphors you've created. Also the pictures coming in mind when I read the lines are beautiful. Brillantly described.

    Keep it up :)
    Lots of love
    Sabine

  • 13 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Wow,.. i have to tell you.. i am seriously blown away.. this flow was unmatched, practically read itself,.. and the imagery was so well-put,.. not one line did i read that seemed cliche or forced.. it really was perfect.. beautiful personification.. i really wish i had the talent you possess.. you should look into publishing your work,.. 5/5 easily and sorry for no crits, but i dont see anything wrong.

  • 13 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Wow,.. i have to tell you.. i am seriously blown away.. this flow was unmatched, practically read itself,.. and the imagery was so well-put,.. not one line did i read that seemed cliche or forced.. it really was perfect.. beautiful personification.. i really wish i had the talent you possess.. you should look into publishing your work,.. 5/5 easily and sorry for no crits, but i dont see anything wrong.

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    I cant add anything ai! its superb! really makes me hate winter myself! ur writting is so vivid and a great use of personification and imagery! well done

  • This is wonderful. (this is going to sound lame, but for lack of a better word...) it's magical. brilliant write, very well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Melissa

    I love nature poems and this one is amazing! Very well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. that was amazing! the imagery was stunning and literally took my breath away! i loved how you gave the seasons characteristics, it really added affect..

    Vile winter shall come spiteful
    ^ i think that it should be "spitefully" but maybe i am wrong.. just checking.

    excellent poem! definetely deserves more than a 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Esther

    This is an amzing poem, i really liked it, my only suggestion and sorry if you don't like it is to change the title from Autumns Advice, to Autumns Grace! and yes i know it doen't fit but ya know! it is only a suggestion!

  • 10 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    A great piece......
    5/5 for this no bet.

    i had a good read...... =)

    u are painting autum with words amazing..
    pls keep writing.=)

    read more of ur poem soon...