Suicide note (hopefully my last one - maybe a release)

by FlowerThatDied   Aug 3, 2005


It's time to say End this,
No one wants me here,
End with one final kiss,
And end it with growing fear,

It's time to say No, I'll bear no more,
And crawl for last pieces of life,
Let your outer body fall to the floor,
That ends lifes struggle and strife,

It's time to dry my tears,
And wait to go,
And as my deepest pain disappears,
I've never again feel so low,

So now I'm going, one last good-bye,
To the ones I love,
And ones whom made me cry,
Wait for a dark hole that comes from the opposite of above.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    wow. thats really deep. its beautiful though. ive felt suicdal before... very much so. have been lately too, but obviously never done it. be careful though, because its something u cant just reverse and take back.
    great poem though, you defintaly have a gift for writing, keep it up!
    lia jnell

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    another great one keep it up.
    well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    HeY hUn, ThIs WaS aNoThEr ToTaLlY rOcKiN' pOeM! kEeP uP tHe Gr8 WoRk cHiCka! 5/5! (*)-_-(*)

    Ur FrIeNd AlWaYz,
    ---eLiZaBeTh---

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicolette

    i love this poem good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Laloser05

    Poppy... PULL URSELF TOGETHER!

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