Another well written poem. <3 5/5 once again! <3 xoxo

Hey! I really like this! Great job! I was the opposite though...I could never tell anyone what I was feeling and then, the "therapist" actually listened...I made her laugh or something stupid like that! Oh well, it's behind me...It's hard to talk about it and I'm glad that you found your salvation in writing...

well, you found yourself among the great people of my favorites list! ;-) beautiful poem! 5/5

Something like this happened to me a bit ago, so i know how it feels, great job! 5/5

wow. deep poem.
love it tho had lots of feeling.

Jacs
xxx

I don't quite get the ending but sometimes I'm just slow like that. ;) Anyway, once again you have a near perfect rhythm.

I can really relate to the idea of the poem. I wonder why people can't just appricate the fact that I'm still here, I'm living and I'm trying...But they just push for me to do more.

Oh well, it's not long now before I can break away from this place. :)

Think happy thoughts...lol...You know like the yellow dinosaur kind. (I know that's sort of odd but it makes you laugh, doesn't it? Even if it's just because I'm crazy.)

:)

Very good poem. Well written, syllables work nicly together and good rhymes. Seems to me like you're doing the same as I do, using the poems as a way to unload, kind of like therapy. Well, I have to run, got stuff to do IRL, but if you'd like me to read more of your poems just tell me and I'd be more then happy too:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

wow good poem it flowed really well ... sad but beautiful ... i will look into some more of ur work just because of this .... 5/5

great poem!

I think you just expressed the emotions of every teenager that has ever struggled with life. Well portrayed.

great poem!! well done =)
xx

good job, it flows very well... although it's such a sad poem!! I still enjoyed reading it.. keep up the good works. :)

very good poem. 5/5

Awwl, very sweet kayla I enjoyed the poem alot. And dont worry no one is perfect but its a same that some people think that others are. Well anyways great Job i loved it keep up the great work xoxox

~Good poem~

I really liked the rhythm of this poem, great job, 5/5.

Kayla!!! LONG time no talk! why aren't you on msn anymore/! newayz GREAT poem it was really awesome!! I hope this guy turns around and loves you! we all need love! neawyz great job! 5/5!! take care buddy!

I loved this poem
you took the words right outta my mouth....
i have spent days wondering why she will not love me...when i love her to THAT EXTENT, why will she not love me even a little....whats more...when i told her my feelings...she goes and tells her friends that she is embarrassed about it....
i dont know if you can imagine how i felt...
and she tells me that she is busy...then i ask her other friend she tells me that she is getting bored.
i could cry my soul from my eyes
god, where am i getting? great poem
dhaval ^_^

Great poem!! I can really relate to this poem!! Great job putting those feelings into words!! Love it!! Love you!! :)