hey this poem is great umm thanx for rating my poem it was for my friend
i like your other poems to

awww wow this was a real touching poem EXCELLENT job!!! keep it up

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this is reli emotional and well written, fantastic i reli liked, and im sorry about ur step sis, i reli hope shes better soon, 5/5 keep writin nd stay strong xxxx thanx 4 ur comment it was reli sweet, and i dnt think ur havin ne problems findin the words, cus ur poems r great!

Well done hunni dats soooooo sweet i didn't know she was in hospital tell her get well sooooon from me :( luv ya snots xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I enjoyed reading this, it kept me intrested, and yes that poem was about me, all of them are, i really appreciate the comment you gave me, you ahve a lot of tallent also, great wrok and keep it up, again thanks fro the comment!!

-sabrina

Hey, sweet poem, i really liked it.
i hope your stepsister is okay.
Thanks for your comment on my poem, i really appreciate it.
XxX Cici XxX

Aww that wOz a really sweet pOem hOpe yOor step sister is Okaii =] thanx fOr yoOr cOmment keep up the Great wOrk

Its amazing.
love u loadz
xxmexx

Awww...i love this one.

I like your poem
it is really good
and i wrote based on my life back then
but i kind of over exagherated
with the killing myself parts