the poem was really sweet, a bit short but i liked it.

Well it was a challange on the Discussion board so I just added it here:)

short and to the point...so sweet...5/5 plz comment on mine when you get a chance...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Well, it's certainly an interesting idea, and very unique. I like how you write a lot.

Thanks for the great comments, also. :)

You're an awesome poet, lol, yes you can call yourself that.

Sam

you certainly have an interesting way of writing. i tried doing that before but it just dont work..lol! 5/5

short but sweet ... i am liking ur poems i think i will check out a few more

Awwl very sweet. I wish a guy wrote a poem about me like that lol. Anyways it was short but thats fine because it all went together perfectly. I enjoyed reading this one alot. good work 5/5

Very nice poem!
You just feel all the emotions through the word who flow so great!
I sure love it!

xxx