Well if you dont take much interest in it's maybe cuz you really dont have any idea of what a man in cell is enduring...When your life is more that dead and that you have no ambitions all you have to do is to believe in allah and find your faith in god....i like this poem even if i prefer love or friedship poem this is amazing,really...good job

wow, indescribable

Very nicely written. 5/5 nothing less. Hope both of you keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

excellent poem... keep it up

Wow, you and your boyfriend have alot of talent. I give alot of credit to him.. I can't write like that.. only sad things and in the same structure.

tell him its writen beautifully.

Excellent, excellent once again. The structure of this poem was different and so heart-filling. I worship Allah and just the mention of him filled my soul with pride and gave a powerful effect to the whole poem. This bit of poetry can be portrayed in many ways. Keep up your spectacular writes! 5/5

This is different, but it works too. Good choice to put it on the site. Well done. xx