wow great poem...i like this one...it has a nice flow...rough in some spots but hey that is okie dokie..lol...5/5 good job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

well done :)

'which way path to take'
which path to take would be better, but i suspect thats a typo. you seem to have a lot of typo's throughout your poems. i suggest you go back and re-read them all.