Comments : Wrapped tight in vanity

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    I feel so sad for you. There is always someone who cares for the real you. it is hard to let them in. The poem allowed me to feel your pain keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I liked the flow of it and the movement and progretion. didnt really dig the whole story behind it. im really sorry if all that is true. great poem. 5/5